Thanks again Annie for the feedback
(and for adding me to your favirot authors on Fanfiction.Net
Yay, another great piece of writing.
I don't think Pixel has appeared in many previous stories, so it's nice to see her in this one, and the redeployment of Gretel works surprisingly well! (I had forgotten that little detail from David's fic.) As usual you totally nailed the various characters' personalities.
I'm glad you liked both the use of Gretel & of Pixel in this story. I wasn't sure I had got the character of Pixel quite right so gratifying to know someone thinks I have.
Ha, this is very similar to a scene in the fic I'm currently working on! The setting is different, but you envisaged and described it in much the same way that I did.
I like the explanation as to why Daisy hadn't seen them in the Geek Week episode! A nice little sketch, especially the ending.
Hahahaha Nice! (or LOVELY. Which ever you prefer)
Great minds think alike
Canadanne wrote:Do keep up the fabulous work!
Well Mi'lady Canadanne your wish is this Goblin Master's command, I'm spoiling you this week.
(Because I'm going be busy this next week and a bit, possibly even two weeks, so I won't be able to do much writing for a while and want to get these two stories started to keep me motivated during this unplanned hiatus.)
So here are the first chapters of two more
Tales from The Goblin Pens
In which I introduce two new villain characters. Well after all I am an Opposition Minnion hahahahahahaha! >:-] >:-] >:-]
So lets start with Chapter 1 of
Everybody Has A Price
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10056163/1 ... as-A-Price
In our first tale this go around a Baron obsessed with wealth has a Business Proposition for Tregaurd but when The Dungeon Master turns him down The Baron finds someone else whom he can manipulate and bribe into doing his dirty work for him.
and next we have Chapter 1 of
The Lord Of Tricks
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10056165/1 ... -of-Tricks
In which the Knightmare realm becomes the playground and its denizens the playthings of a twisted Warlock who just loves to play mean spirited tricks on anyone and everyone only his tricks might just prove to be deadly for some....
As always please enjoy these offerings. There will be more forthcoming once I get this next week and a bit out the way including:
The coninuation/conclusions to these two stories.
A Grimes Fairy Tale given a Knightmare Twist
A Story starring a rather underused Hag from Series 4 of KM
and maybe even, if the Powers That Be spyglass signal His Lordship intercepted is correct, a return to action for a Pair of Dungeon Ranger's who's adventures I used to chronicle in The Eye Shield Fanzine
But for now The Goblin Pen is going into temporary Temporal Disruption.
See you all soon though