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Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 13 Nov 2008, 13:53
by Velvet
I wonder if anyone would be prepared to beta a story for me? Ideally somebody who knows a thing or two about very young babies, but that's not essential.

PM me if you're up for it.

Thanks in advance!

Re:Request for a Beta

Posted: 18 Nov 2008, 12:13
by Velvet
Hello.

The last thing I want to do is be pushy, so I hope that's not how this post appears, but I had a PM from Emii offering her beta services very shortly after starting this thread.

I sent a reply but I'm not sure whether it actually went to her, or whether she's seen it but not responded yet, or whether she's simply not been on here since last week.

Emii, if you have seen it then do accept my apologies - I don't intend to hurry you, I just want to work out whether the PM I sent you only managed to get as far as my outbox.

Thanks all!

Vel

Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 03 Dec 2008, 14:01
by Velvet
Hi all!

I've just uploaded a new story to ff.net. Allow me to introduce you to The Jester's Child.

The dungeon opens for another season, and we find Motley looking after his infant daughter by Mellisandre alone. But when Hennae goes missing Motley must rush to find her, although he doesn't know where she is.

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 03 Dec 2008, 21:39
by PookasRule
Thanks for uploading it for us. From what I've seen it looks really good and I look forward to reading more. :)

Motley deserves his own story. ;)

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 04 Dec 2008, 10:13
by Velvet
Ah, fantastic, thanks Pooka!

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 04 Dec 2008, 10:14
by PookasRule
I love Knightmare fan fiction. I'm actually attempting to write my own as we speak.

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 04 Dec 2008, 15:57
by HStorm
Nice to get some new KM fanfic. There's been hardly any for years.

I do have some feedback for this story - some of it's positive, some of it's negative. Please let me know if you'd like me to post it here or to IM it to you privately, Velvet.

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 04 Dec 2008, 22:43
by sozboz
I hope Motley gets eaten.

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 04 Dec 2008, 22:57
by sozboz
A team of Knightmare contestants is not who I would entrust to rescue my daughter, but that's just me.

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 05 Dec 2008, 13:34
by Velvet
sozboz wrote: A team of Knightmare contestants is not who I would entrust to rescue my daughter, but that's just me.
True, but Motley weighed up the danger of level 3 and the dungeoneer's partial immunity to such danger, and therefore the fact that they'd get there at all.

Two people searching is better than one, especially when you don't know where to start.

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 05 Dec 2008, 15:25
by sozboz
Oh, I can totally conceive that Motley would!

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 10 Dec 2008, 12:22
by Velvet
Chapter 2 is now up, guys!

Re:Fanfiction: The Jester's Child

Posted: 17 Dec 2008, 11:49
by Velvet
...and chapter 3 is now up! The final one, the end confrontation!

Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it! If anyone wants any more fanfiction from me, please do let me know. I've got several fandoms I intend to write for but I enjoyed this one. Just drop me a line (or, even better, a review.)